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i think ure right littlefreaky that is an excellant idea

I have to disagree with my Tails-Brother, aegis on this one X)
I think the opening scene is fine in every way.

Maybe make the art better, but leave it black and white.
If you decide to make the majority of the comic in colour, then leave the beginning B/W, like it is now.

I don't know why, but it seems like such a nice effect having it black and white in the beginning and become more and more colourful.

And I like the way that Trace just seems to be dropped into the world from nowhere and no-one (including himself) has any idea what he's doing there.
X)

id say add colour, because it would go well if the whole comic was in colour.

I think that the comic should be coloured (I’m English ignore the spelling), but the art work should not be changed. The current art shows development throughout the comic, changing it now would look strange plus it would take Tom longer to draw.

On the topic of script alterations, the guy who's being possessed by neutral, maybe he could have the language speech marks illustrating when the host is talking/thinking and when neutral is speaking/thinking or somthing

E.g. "Who the hell does this guy think he is?"
"Wait... he looks like..."
(Neutral "<Trace Legacy... Right on time>
"You-your. The Famous Trace Legacy!"

The descision has already been made to put the comic in black and white but with a new opening scene in color. As for the host vs. the mask, the mask has complete control over the host it is posessing, so the differentiaion would be more what the mask says vs. what the mask thinks, and those are already available via speech bubbles.

In my opinion, I think the interaction between trace and the ephemeral/hunter host is stylized perfectly as it is.

soz. didn't have time to read all the previous pages, but you're right neutral does completely control the host so what i said doesn't make sense. bleh ignore the noob.

Personaly I think its fine the way the story starts out right now. I cant wait to see it with the updated art

The beginning is what got me into the comic in the first place, so I'd say leave it as is...:3

yeah leave it as it is......

LEAVE IT......sorry...sorry...wont hapen again....

Forget doing a comic book... do a movie/animated series/whatever!!

You should up date the art but other wise leav as is.

Those are his long term goals, if I'm not mistaken.

It would of been nice if you added a epiolog to give them the idea of whats happening, The drawing changed alot snice you started it, but im not sure if it was for the better or worse..... Goodluck

So has it been decided that the whole comic will be black and white, except the opening ?

Or will the opening your talking about not be part of the story-line ?
Like a character description / epilogue thing ?

surely it hasnt gotten old to yall! i mean, the best comic, the king of all books!( when it comes out) im surprised yall havent been lineing up, day after day, to influence the book!!!!!!!!!! :x