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YEY! I got to make the thread!! *dances* He finally said he loved her, and infornt of his "wife" too! I wonder if she really is his wife? it was kinda sudden, and if he has a wife, why did he also have a girlfriend? She's smiling when he says he loves Flora!Nuetral looks pretty scared that he was able t say it "Y-you're not supposed to be able to say that! I saw the future! This isn't what happens!" HAH! Well it did happen, so your future is wrong!

Well, This is a great comic. However, one wonders what Neutral does next, eh?

NEU: "Fine- I see you wont give up so easily... so I will give flora up-- AND TAKE YOUR WIFES BODY!!!"
Trace " "NOOOOO!!!"
Wife: "Eeeep!"
NEUTRAL WIFE! " HEHEHEHE!!!"
Flora: "Yay! Now we can have a threesome and make that guy who draws all the yuri think naughty things and then draw them!"
Trace: "Horray!"
Tom: "Wth?"
Fans: "Uhg not again..."
Phil "<_< >_>" *draw* *draw* *draw*


Keith: "What about mmeeeeee!!!"
*Phil Erases Keith...*

Well, one thing's for certain: Neutral didn't expect Trace's answer at all. And somehow, Trace's wife seems happy about it too.

However...

...

Well, there's got to be a 'however' to this part of the story, right? :roll:

I hope not.
For now, the comic seems to be turning the exact way I wiished it to.

I feel sorry for Traces wife ;_; although the odd part is she looks kinda happy but still ><!

Saria clearly saw right through him at the beginning. I think she's known all along.

nice comic =D and yeah, I think his wife knew it. But isn't she mad or anything?

Yeah, i would agree Saria has known the whole time. Her questions indicate this. It also could have been ver ... erm ... plot convient esp, but this scene here really seals that path off, and I'd like to think of Mr Tom as above such chicanery ;3
Makes me wonder smore about this whole Saria deal. Did we find out if she was really his wife... I seem to think so but don't explicitely remember it. She seems kind of happy that he can admit he loves Flora. Why? We don't really know anything about Trace n Saria's old relationship, so freankly the options are far to many ..... but at least Saria seems nice. Btw what ever happened with that Saria is teeeeerrrribly ill whatnot? Maybe im making too much of a big deal of this shift away from her plot significance as the nature of the medium makes any focus shift seem sudden and all encompassing, especially one as involved as this. Oh noez your hawt tigar gf r possessssed!1!!! by ur wurst emeny / a gawd OMGWTFword. Yeah. Like that. Bottom line: More Saria and more kittens ;3

HAPPY DAY!!!!!!!!!!! HE FINALLY SAID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Although, Saria does look kinda sad, happy but sad. She may have just been there to try to get Trace to realize that he does love Flora. And doesn't Neutral know that there are about 1000 factors that can change what happenes in the futrure? *mutters*idiot...

oh so no one likes Sage's idea! Lets just ignore him! Fine! *Goes back to drawing*

*Looks over at Sage.*
It's not so much the idea as it is the fact that you've already done enough damage with your other comics. You should keep that comic for yourself.....

Jeez Sage, quit acting like no one likes you. IN reality only a few people like you. J/k ;3 No, I "like" youre idea, but frankly I have seperate bins in my brain for girls whom I find irresistably cute and thos whom im attacted to in a much naughtier way. But then again ...... yuri kekekekekeke. No Sage, If we didn't pretend to ignore you you would never get any drawing done. I do appreciate the humor in the whole Tom = wtf and fans = ugh bit, but poor kieth. No, wait that was funny too.
Anyway Saraphim, don't be so mean to Sage, its not nice to stifle anyones creativity no matter how odd it seems to you. Unless of course you meant it jokingly, but if you did then you missed your chance for the little apssive aggressiver smiley at the end ;3
Case in point.
And yes I realize I am coming off as quite the hypocrite, but just deal okay ;3
Hahahaha, now you don't know if im joking or not, which obviously shows how witty I am ;3
God I hate how much of an idiot I come off as. ;3

ON a more serious (or not, bwaahahahahah) note, more flashbacks to Flora's childhood. She is fantastically cute. I go OMG KITTEN. Really. Oh, and please get rid of any pedophiliac notions. REally. ;3

OH NOEZ I DID IT AGAIN!

Ok, now for something that has to do with the comic and not my diseased minds insipid line of thought, or maybe it's both.
1) Neutrality is an idiot.
Really, has she never been wrong or something? This leads me to a conclusion of plot significance. As in omg the FLora Trace bond is so strong yadda yadda, defies the dieties yadda yadda. Maybe some sort of chrono cross - esque dimension branch. Certainly isn't very all knowing for a diety. It is highly probable that similarly important events to warrent such a branch have happened in the past, but she has never seen an incorrect outcome of these branches in the past? Does she even know there is a branch? It seems like she is not very tuned into the mechanics of the world for such a being. Although I cannot blame her for disbeleif when a method which has always provided such accurate data is suddenly wrong. MEh reading too much into it. Or not enough.
2)Saria is cute.
She is the cutest humarl in this comic. And that whole terrible disease stuff. And she totally doesn't think that everyone has to be in love with her. She is happy for others. Yay. Of course shoe could turn out to be some super neutrality Zombie, and most Zombies totally don't do it for me, so that Is the only thing that I can count against her.
3)I am far too cynical.
Really I am. I looked at this and thought "how contrived." I almost thought I had lsot my beutiful childhood innocence somehow, almost as if I refused to beleive in the fantastic. A dismissal of the romantic beleief that everything matters and love is the strongest force in the world. Luckily this fear has subsided as I realize that deep down I like it. I like the idea that everything in the world can revolve around the relationship of two lovers. My mind is at ease.
4) This is entirely too long
Really, jeeze, I haven't spouted this much drivel in ages.
5) Kittens ;3

Wow, this is interesting. Trace's "wife" seeing what happened, I agree, she probably knew this the entire time. Neutrality, perhaps not the brightest light bulb in the bunch, really should have seen this coming. But after this can Flora fight back (if she could hear it, I have no idea how far the control goes, and if sound can be blocked). Trace finally admitted what he needed to for the longest time. But what of those who followed Trace, where are they in all this confusion, they are clearly in town. Also what of Flora's once fiance, perhaps he will fight Trace out of hatred.

Well, Sage, greates... idea... ever, or to me it was great. Of course my sense of humor goes from sosiphiticated, to 13-year-old who just discovered sex. So... yeah...

Anyway, final note, nice work Tom, I like how Trace's shirt is a little messed up after blocking the Neutrality's blast with a crate.

It's because you erased Keith.