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Sable Dove
 Post subject: Phalanx Rising.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 3:14 pm 
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The following story contains mature content; view at your own risk.

It's sci-fi with hints of fantasy and what could be considered forms of magic. There are furries (transgenics, actually), but there isn't one introduced until the third part, so bear with me for a bit.

Chapter 1a.
Chapter 1b.
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Sable Dove
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Part Two is up now, Part Three is drafted.
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I likies, very much. Somebody missed a couple homophones, but nothing major. Psst, it's "bare" arm, not "bear" arm, unless he's the transgenic? :wink:


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Thanks Wynni. I'm going through again to pick out any little things; nothing worth rereading it for; just a few little slip-ups.

Furthermore... Damn you homophones!!!!!
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