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Here are some of the characters I've made for the story I've been working on here lately. Let me know what ya think about them and feel free to ask anything about them or the story... although it's still in works.

I can't fault the art, it is very very good. Although, Alfrada is sporting some pretty unrealistic boobage there, especially if she's meant to be a fighter

o-o

Damn. Alfrada's big. Every chick I've seen sporting that kind of chest is much larger around and more vertically challenged. Not to mention that it'd be hard to fight with things like that hanging on your chest.

Although the art is very good. Although Natheren looks like he's trying to look badass. It works, it just seems like he's trying.

Is it just me or does Reeves bear and uncanny resemblance to Gene Starwind?

lol yeah they'er very huge and its defenitly unrealistic but thats anime for ya =P plus the person whom I've based this character off of was very well endowed so its kinda my way of pokeing fun at her and an anime sterotype.

I like to think oversized boobs is not all that anime is about... :P

But it's nott hat they are big that bothers me, I don't mind big boobs It's just they are so big they kind look odd on Alfrada's figure

My vote goes for Natheren, love the detail. Second choice would be Reeves then.. was a close one though ^^

Seige is about the most realistic of them all, so that's the one I picked. Anime isn't really my thing, so the overexaggerated biceps, collarbones, and boobs usually make me lose interest.

hmm yeah I kinda see what ya mean there. I'll either have to down size them or tinker with the toros some more ...though I'm leaning more to down sizing them abit.

Shift some mass of the breasts to the tail please >_>

Tailboobs? Oh God, nothing is good about that mental image, nothing!!

Heh... but I mean, the breasts are too big and the tail is too narrow.

Everyone likes large fluffy tails.

I did concider giving her busher tail but back out of it in the last minute to make it more catish looking. Then again it would look better balanced if I did. Putting boob mass to the side would a tail with more volume look better?

tailboobs? lmao yeah bad mental image indeed.

I personally like Natheren the best. Partly because he reminds me strongly of Cloud Strife in the way that he looks so moody, and partly because his title is, "the merciless." That alone sounds intruiging enough. Any chance of getting an explanation to that part?

And yes, tailboobs is a very strange mental image. And once again it originated from FastChapter. Indirectly. Though I forgive him. After all, what choice do I have? I love him after all.


































If anyone actually fell for that, I will both mock you and laugh at you at the same time.

Yeah I reckon down sizing them is the way to go