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Wow... To think I'd be the first one for once. Cool.

Anyway, that old [censored] General needs a good strangle. Also intresting to know about the Basitin King.

I'm going to make this post short, just to make sure I'm really the first one.

The plot's moving forward again. I like it.

Re: last panel;

Tssss, my original post was edited.

Anyway, here's some of my thoughts. Could the Basitin king's illness have something to do with the Templar? Is it a magical illnes, created by them and given to the king so that the Basitins would allow the construction of the tower? I think so.

Also, the Information General is apparently more pissed off than I had expected. He obviously doesen't want Keith to pass the test, and get banished again. Though I guess I must complement him on his strong beleif in their laws.

And exept from all of that, I say "Hurrah!" to that Keith's time period was shortened. Means that we're gonna see some action sooner than I was hoping. I hope.

I have such a huge with problem with the general's last statement. How is Keith returning from banishment unfair? Bringing Trace to them was the one exception that allowed for his return and he completed the task (which was supposed to be the only unfair part that I can fathom). As for mocking the judicial courts, if they never wanted Keith to return then they would never have given him an option in which he could return in the first place.

(Huh, I think this is my first comic rant.)

When a Basitin is banished they are not supposed to return. But to make it look less cruel, they give the banished one a chance to return by completing a task. This task is however made impossible to make sure that the banished one has absolutely no chance of returning regardless. But since Keith actually did complete his task, the Information General probably feels as if he has tricked the law. And therefore, he is bent on making sure that the law is upheld, be it in a legal way or not.

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*trip* *faceplant*

What the?! A new voter incentive and comic this early? I don't know whether or not to be happy or very afraid. Either way, Mike is pretty hot as a girl. Also I believe this is the first mention of the Basitin having a king, I always though that they we're governed by the 3 generals. Speaking of the generals, doesnt the info general's color seem off?

Edit: Nevermind, Looks like I was thinking of the Arms General. Also I thought the Basitin were immune to most diseases (obviously a cold is one exception) I wonder what he could have gotten that would threaten his life.

As I said, my main suspect are the Templars. Seems to fit their way of convincing people just perfectly. And the whole thing about the tower being built to keep the king alive just strengthens my suspicions.

I really, really dislike the general. I don't believe Keith returning from banishment is 'unfair', he did what they asked of him. Not to mention the fact that he was innocent the entire time. Still, I hope Keith can redeem himself in the small amount of time he has left .... I don't think he can betray his friends like that.

I don't think you are meant to think Keiths return is unfair, you are however supposed to dislike the genral.

I think that that candle is getting lit no matter what happens. If anything it'll protect Natani, after all they won't go hunting for someone they think is already dead now will they ;)

I actually want Natani to be the one who saves Trace, seeing as she is kinda meant to kill him if she gets the chance. It would solidify her as a member of the group once and for all.

Wow!. i didn't expect an update, but i like the idea of getting back on the old schedule, also i like the incentive. Idk, i have to examine this comic more to get more opinions

Tom is all like:"NINJA UPDATE" and stuff.
Anyone else the general's eyes changed color in the last panel?

Awesome, we're back on track! |D

About the comic, I sense an epic battle coming... Hopefully Nora is involved :)

Hmm... Does anyone recall a certain moment with a particular keidran determined to murder a certain human with a knife? Gee, my memory is failing me again. How did that end up again? :P

Besides, Natani is a trained assassin - it's either tears or blood, lot's of blood.

I don't think the eye color changed. I literally think Tom pulled an angle effect with us this time. Some peoples eyes are like that. They change with different angles and lighting. I know mine do.

Also, part of me thinks this was planned somewhat.

Plan A: Banish Keith, and give him an impossible task. Wewt. :grin:

Plan A2: Darnit. He completed the task. :x Well, now we have a good person to blame for the tower and the strange actions that are going on cause secretly we're a very corrupt power :twisted: , but we don't want anyone to know that. |D