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I wrote some poems a while back and in the mood to share, some of them are very depressing, but a few are kinda of 'Funny' as a few have said. The first one is not one of those though.

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Going to hell

I wake up
wake up on the cold ground
The last thing i saw was
was
was my girlfriend running to me
and
then
then a loud shot
that
that must have been it
i remember now
the gun, my despair, that park, and her
I can still hear her now
her cries to come back
her cries for me
but why
why does she cry
I hurt her
I betrayed her so many times
She held on to me for so long
but why
I didnt deserve her, i never did
I couldnt stand to see her hurt anymore
So i ended it all
all in one shot
she screams her love for me
holding tight to my dead shell
my cold black blood staining her
a cloaked man stands waiting
as he beckons i know his name
i know where i am going
its the only place that can hurt me now
the only place that can hurt me as i hurt her
the pit of the fallen
the man turns to lead
i pass him
as i say
"Ive been here before"
to hell with me then
i couldn't save myself
but at least
i can save her



"Im sorry"

Nice poem, K. Moar plz? Very nice. Getting sleepiez now. See y'all later, peeps.

This was a nice piece, very emotionial and heart rendering and something that all of us could relate to

Good job

A Sniper


I load my rifle
Load it up with 5 shots
fifty caliber rounds
none of you will live long

Im feeling cruel today
I wont aim for your head
your liver will do i say
i crack an evil smile

in war i am its god
i pull the trigger
that poor man
he falls to his knees

i cant hear his screams
i aim for his right hand
my trigger is pulled again
he'll never write his family

i see him rolling on the ground
i invoke the fear death upon him
my will alone lets him live or die
he will die

my last shot will end this
i stay my bullet for a bit
letting the fear of the shot built within him
then it ends

i take him from this world
never knowing my name
never seeing my face
i am the god of war