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Evil Trace's personality bit, last line, "before he become too deeply involved" should be, "before he becomes too deeply involved."

Comic for January 8th, 2008.

Fourth panel, Tavernkeeper's dialogue. He's missing the apostrophe in the contraction "won't" in his second line.

It reads, "Physical contact is prohibited by law, and I wont have it in my tavern!" It should be, "Physical contact is prohibited by law, and I won't have it in my tavern!"

Ah...should've posted this here....good to know...XD

Comic 01-08-2008
First panel:
Flora should be using the word "than" instead of "then"...
:3

In this comic 2/26/08
it says 'Looks, I just...need some time to think.'
it should be look
Keith is talking to Laura when it happens

don't worry, I'm not a great speller either...that's why I use Microsoft Word!

lol

Today's comic, 2/28/08:

"agreeded" should be "agreed"

Today's comic, 3/7/08, Laura says "it's nice to meet you again, Natani."

as far as I can tell, they haven't met before.

Laura asked Natani and Flora if they knew where Keith was.

:3

March 24th, 2008

3rd Frame. Kathrin says: "Becides, how else am I going to preform the second part of the massage?"

I believe it should say:

"Besides, how else am I going to perform the second part of the massage?"

Changed:

Becides -> Besides

preform -> perform

Use firefox web browser, it has auto-spell correction built in along with hundreds of plugins!

I sound like a sleazy care salesman right about now.

You are not the only one who struggles with grammar, when all else fails use a dictionary!

I got a 777 out of 800(near perfect) on my aims grammar and literary skills comprehension. Thanks to Mr. thesaurus and Mrs. dictionary.

You can't spell check images, and the programs most people use to make comics don't either...

Yes I know that but auto-correct merely underlines the words you misspell on the net.

Other words it gradually improves your grammar.

My score before gracing the aims was around 200-300, the more I posted in forums the better my grammar and sentence structure became.

With the help of auto-correct to guide me.

Anything below 300 is classed as far below standards.

I recommend just using a dictionary if you're not sure on a word, or even if it looks odd. Sounds basic, but basic works.

Either that or have someone proofread the dialogue before you publish it.

That's kinda what he's doing...

http://twokinds.comicgenesis.com/d/20031219.html
Second panel.
Basted Keidran should be Blasted Keidran

Today's Comic (April 08, 2008), First Panel.

"How do I keep getting to situations like this?"

should be

"How do I keep getting into situations like this?"