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meh poems
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My love for you has grown,
but my love i still... feel,

A burning rage,
my face turning red,
anger and hatred,
turning me,
mad :x
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My soul of sorrows,
the rain hitting my face,
Loneliness and emptiness,
turning me,
sad :(
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the summers sun,
hitting my face,
my soul being Field with,
Butterflies,
turning me,
happy 8)
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A burning rage,
my soul of sorrows,
rain poring down,
my legs giving out,
making me feel,
regected :cry:
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My heart set a flutter,
blood rushing to my face,
butterflies every were insinde of me,
and out,
making me in
love :oops:
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My heart,
my burning rage,
my soul,
the summer sun,
the rain,
is making me emo,
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I guess no one wants to read poetry any more... am i right or has everyone just not been on?

Best ending to a poem EVER! :shock:

Thanx <=.=> i'm happy that you liked them... did you like them all or just the last one?



:roll: * god i'm nosy*
but still?

Those were all prett good (my own stuff creeps me out when I read it...course writing it all at night when I'm really pissed at something/someone dosen't help.....)

All of them really. I don't really read poems (or write them for that matter) so I'm not familiar with the techniques involved - if any. Dunno, the end is just so straight forward I loved it. :-)

All of them really. I don't really read poems (or write them for that matter) so I'm not familiar with the techniques involved - if any. Dunno, the end is just so straight forward I loved it. :-)[/quote]


thanx, hay mabe just try to do poetry and send it to me in a pm! I'll look over it for you and i'll tell you if readers will like it or not ... Every one like something differant and i like alot of stuff, you just need to find you thing!

aww, they're cute!!

But don't be afraid to reawaken dead threads BUT ONLY if it's an art or story thread that you started, mmkay?

kk,
Happy holidays every one!!!

more poems!!!!
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WALL
Where were you?
All this time?
Listening to me complain but the answer,
Long lasting in front of me.

HEAT
tHe heat is very over powering,
Every day was different from the next, hotter.
At 8:00 in the night, when you would hug me,
The heat from you is very over powering.

WHAT
What happened?
How could you let that happen to me?
After I said I loved you?
That is too much to ask of you…love.

WHO
Who was it that took you away from me?
How could you let them?
lOok over at me and say those cruel words?

HELP
He never said the things you said,
hE never cared, he
Let me down when I was in need,
Please come back to me so he will leave.

You, didn’t, said, didn’t, always, Never
You didn’t ask me out,
You didn’t even care,
You didn’t notice,
You didn’t stare,

You said yes,
You said no,
You said hold on,
You said go.

You didn’t say,
You didn’t smile,
You didn’t tell me,
You didn’t hug me,

You always go there,
You always do,
You never have time for me and you,
You always stay,

You never called,
You never came,
You never gave me the blame,
You never say you need me.

XD

Glad you updated your poems again blu3. =^^=

thank you... WALL is for me mum...
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another poem!!!
it sad_
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WIDE-EYED AND INNOCENT.
You stare at me,
Wide-eyed and innocent,
I stare back,
Coldly and mischievously,
You cry out my name,
I whisper yours,
You run towards me,
Into the light,
I step back,
Into the dark,
Your eyes shinning,
In excitement,
My eyes are glossed over,
With no expression,
I love you,
You say cringle,
Why do you?
I ask.
How could you say such cold words?
Because you’ve only known me,
For just a week,
Now you stare at me,
Wide-eyed and innocent.
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and yet more!!!
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THE ONE WAY LOVINGS…OR NOT
Every time I’m with you I want to cry,
Every time we touch I feel sick,
Every time I look in your eyes I want to gouge mine out,
Every time you say ‘I love you’ I feel the need to cry.
Every time you comfort me I feel the need to reject you,
Every time you whisper into my ear wish it would bleed,
Every time we hold hands I wish mine would fall off.

I love when I’m with you,
I love when I touch your shoulder,
I love kissing you,
I love looking into your eyes,
I love you,
I love comforting you in my arms,
I love whispering to you in a cooing way,
I love holding your hand.
Most of all I love the way you don’t love me at all.
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HEART ATTACK.
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A POEM STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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There are some days I wish we never met,
Although all the time I loved you,
Then I found out about her.
You said you would never cheat on me,
But you did despite that,
I still love you even though it hurts.
‘I love you, you know that’ you insist,
Trying to hug me and kiss
I back away,
Tears stinging my eyes,
I cry out in pain and agony,
‘STOP! JUST STOP!!”
I needed you; just like how you said you needed me,
I fall to the floor and grasp my chest in pain,
I can’t breath, my heart is beating to fast,
I scream out, louder then my cry,
‘PLEASE, NO! I-I LOVED YOU! WHY?!’
I can’t take it
My arms and whole body shutdown,
I fall to the ground with a loud thump,
You scream my name, and even louder the next time,
You could’ve prevented this,
This thing that has taken me so long to cope with.
I’m at peace with you now.
But you could’ve prevented this.
Because now your not at peace with your self.
My life ended that day when I had a heart attack and I found you with her .

HAHA DOUBLE POEST!!
i will be putting more poems on here soon!

Why do your poems make me sad?

Why are they really short too? Ever thought about writing about something else in your poems?

WHY ALL THE QUESTIONS! WHYYYYYYYY!????

But yeah, I don't like poems too much, yours are short in the lines and for some reason that aggrivated me. Not sure why.

<_< But that's just me mr. blue bunny man.

why thank you? is that good or bad?
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poems
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THE TRUTH IS TO SHALKING
BY: COURTNEY
You ask me why
I always wore pants,
And when I wore shirts
I wore boots.
You asked me why I never,
Wore tube tops or backless shirts.
You asked me why I always wore,
Wrist bands,
And that week I didn’t hug you,
I got whipped,
So if I hugged you it would hurt.
You asked me why I wore thick black panty hoes…
And now tonight,
The night I asked you to get use a hotel room,
Even though we are in 8th grade,
I took off my top,
My sweat bands, my boots,
And my stockings.
To show you the real me.
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UNTITELD
BY: COURTNEY
Electric blue, neon yellow in a mix,
To streak across this jet black and purple sky,
The rain is slowly starting to pour,
Thunder aroused in the distance,
Electric pink, neon purple in a mix,
To touch down from the heavens,
The rain is now cold hail,
Thunder booming over head,
Electric orange, neon red in a mix,
To ignite the opus tree,
The rain rattling with it’s hail mixture on my roof,
Thunder shaking the earth,
Electric green, neon indigo in a mix,
To lighten up my dark gaze.
BY: COURTNEY
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We walk,
Side by side,
You touch,
My wrist then slide your hand down to my hand,
You say,
Words that make my heart ach and eyes tear,
I try,
To hold back from my stinging eyes,
I look,
Deep into your eyes and search for the unspoken answers,
We’re holding,
Hands as we turn the corner,
I turn,
Me head from your glistening blue eyes,
You apologize,
To me and tell me things that make me run,
I run,
Until I can’t breath and collapse in cheats pain,
You chase,
After me and I allow your hug,
I feel,
Safe in your arms and loved at the same time,
You begin,
To cry and tell me of your sorrows for me,
I can’t,
Breath, your grasp’s too tight around my ribs,
I fall,
And guess you catch me because I awake in your arms,
I turn,
And allow your hand upon the small of my back,
The end,
Is coming to our “friendship” please don’t let that happen.
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tell me what you think!