Random Obsessor wrote:
See as I said in the last page, how did she get in there? Wow check out the third panel Bewbs!!! Sorry I sometimes get the feeling that I’m not perverted enough to browse this forum.
You'll learn. :wink: What strikes me as a bit odd is that short-furred carnivores normally have visible nipples even when their mammaries aren't swollen, but they're not visible on Flora or this slave-girl. With long-furred types, you couldn't see them, but on short-furred individuals they should be there as a faint shadow under most lighting conditions. That would both add to the realism and titillate the readers a bit more ...
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I think that Flora is begining to warm up to the new Keidran. She didn't kill her for getting her chucked out of the bathroom...
Lessee; what I'd do if I were the author is have Flora slowly realize that this intruder is uncomfortable with her assigned task. So they start talking, Trace opens the door and sees that they're talking, and invites them both back in. Before long, they're learning about her sorry state as a slave, and are picking her brain about Eric's whole operation and why he's giving them a ride. And she realizes that Trace and Flora just might be her ticket out of slavery if she plays her cards right.
But I'm not the author; maybe he has ideas more twisted than this.
[First post worked! Now to find a good avatar, and find out how to change that "newbie" to something less explicable ...]
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