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A friend of mine and me are starting a web comic we have a plot going on but our ending sucks.
-----Its about a boy who wakes up after being in an cryogenic sleep only to find that his hands and legs are leapored shaped and colored blue not to mention he has cat ears and a long tail! He finds himself in the woods along a pond and as he is looking at himself hes attacked by a strange creature which is actually a girl! And to make it even stranger she looks compleatly like a wolf!
And it goes on from there my problem is the rest.... Should I do something with memory loss? SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME OUT HERE!

your plot is greatly lacking in wtfcentaurs. remedy this issue.








ps: original harder

"wtfcentaurs"? I dont get you...

I know it seems sketchy but that why I'm here, any constructive critisism is welcome so pleaze dont flame the newbie!

if you want to be taken seriously, you might want to sign up.

Also, structuring your request so it DOESNT look like an attack on the comic might go a loooong way :p






pps: wtfcentaurllamas.

Wow never thought i would get to say this -- Listen to SpriteFire -- LISTEN CAREFULLY-- you're both guests-- and that holds no weight here-- being a guest is like being a spectator in a FPS game-- sure you can look around-- but interacting is nearly impossible-- join the game-- become a regular and we can help you---

Dont do that and heres all the help im going to offer-- ive seen basically the story you have told us so far-- it sucked - and unless you put more detail into it and have an awsome artist-- it is going to continue to suck. Of course any decent artist or writer will tell you the same thing I just did but maybe a bit nicer like - "I like the idea but it lacks depth" -- another way of saying "man this sucks- how about actually doing something with it and THEN bring it to me..."


As a guest you wont be getting much help-- and as a one time thing-- it wont be much better-- either become a regular-- visit the forum and post often at least once or twice every couple of days-- and we will go out of our way to help you.

I wonder how you're going to have a whole webcomic when you barely seem to have a mastery of the basic english language?