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 Post subject: Beginner drawing
PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:33 pm 
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Well this is my drawing. I'm still new at this. Please give me advise so I can get better.
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:45 pm 
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The feet are a bit small, but other than that, it's great! (very original)


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:52 pm 
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One of the characters from the case closed (Japanese version, 名探偵コナン) I agree about the feet, maybe the hands a bit larger (I'm a proprtional freak).


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:58 pm 
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Yeah I guess they are to small and yes it is from a japanese manga 名探偵コナン the american show case closed.


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 6:11 pm 
That's pretty good!


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 6:24 pm 
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Thanks. :oops:


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 7:36 pm 
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I'm guessing he's partially hunched over, but I'm not sure because...well there's no shading. In anycase, his lower legs seem a little too short for his upper legs. And yes..the feet and hands are a little on the small side...but hands are evil (or so I think)...so don't focus too much on fixing that right away. I'm guessing he's got a cape attached to his shoulders, but it's a little hard to distinguish around the shoulders. (I'm not sure what character he is because I've never really seen the series/manga). Asides from that, maybe work on the folds in the clothing a little. I can't say much in that regard cause I'm fairly bad with clothing myself lol. However, overall I'd say it's pretty good. :) Just keep at it.


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PostPosted: Thu Oct 13, 2005 8:41 pm 
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pretty good.....you passed the test of it being better than my stuff.....


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