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Here are some pics I created recently:
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/pyrofinal.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/pyros.jpg Note: not to scale
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/pyronormal.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/su-37vsa-10.jpg Nothing to do with pyro.

Tell me what you think.

Work on anatomy. The first pyro I saw had way too small hands and feet. The second one (pyro normal) was better, but still very small. Anyways, most of the proportions are way off, which throws other things off. I recomend looking at some of blind's lovely tutorials he linked at the top of the Drawing Board and work with those until things start to look more in proportion.

The last picture (I figured out what i'm looking at now! doh.X_x) is awesome. I can't draw planes to save my life. Or guns either. *sigh*

I'm not so good when it comes to people but objects are no prob for me.

New pic. I think it is better than the first: http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/karate.jpg
Note: THis is a close drawing of me dressed for karate and yes, I really an a shodan black belt. 8)

I'd say it's off just about the same as the others.Tiny feet (though I can't really draw them well at all), torso is huge, lower body is tiny in comparison, the arms are kinda funny. The ears are out of place (I forgot to mention this on the others), the neck is odd as well, and the body is just too big. Sorry if I sound harsh, it's only 12 and I know it's going to be a bad day for me. :cry:

its ok. My Karate uniform makes it seem that way for the upper body and I did this reading at around eight in the morning. :shock: Well, its getting better little by little.

My karate uniform does that as well.... but not that badly. The torso for the other two you have up are also very large and long. Go read up on your anatomy and practice now! :lol:

I like to explore and all that and I just follow some formats with the legs and torso like Case Closed or Meitantei Connan in Japan :).

Here is another one I did. http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b120/Flanker11/Bryanpencil.jpg I'm starting to get better slowly. He also is wearing those ninja boots thing. I've seen and wore then before they are that thin

Yay, german weapons^^

the rest: your drawings a better than mine, but i started drawing 5days ago^^

The boots may be thin but the feet are not-- neither are the legs- and the arms are way to long and the head is disproportionate from the body and the eye is placed badly- the whole body is way to long-
Practice anatomy- get a feel for proportions and work on perspective.

I'm getting there Just been drawing for three days so far. I am just wondering how big the head should be compared to the body and aproximatly how long should the legs be to the body (I'm guess about same length)?
I'm working on it. I'm practicing on drawing people because I only could draw objects and planes good. :( :? :o
And yes those are HK German manufactured sniper rifle and machiene gun but the MP5K is not to scale.

Stealth how old are you (only to do with drawing nothing else :roll: ) and also you guys aren't normally this harsh to other artists (its not that harsh its just harsh-er than normal) but i agree with their accusations(?) (cant remember the right word) about proportions etc. Maybe you should try multple characters in one picture. Keep postin 'em!

I'm entering high school this september waht do you mean by multiple characters in one pic? :?

like pyro+some other guy/gal in the same picture