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Endless Horizon
 Post subject: Comic for July 30th, 2008
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yeah!!! i got first post! great page tom and happy belated b-day... i feel uber bad for keith tho... he sure feels like crap cuz he knows what he was asked to do...=(
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Keldoth Wolfram Dekel
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Is... is the writing on the wall imaginary or real?
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Personally, I like the font and half-hidden words for effect on the last panel. Can anyone read all of them? I got Betrayer, Traitor, Liar, Double with a CA underneath it, Killer, and Unfaithful...

Also, it looks like Natani is about to 'pop' over her arm in Panel 3. I don't know if it's an accident on drawing the hand or what, but it is kinda amusing.

Keldoth Wolfram Dekel wrote:
Is... is the writing on the wall imaginary or real?


I think it's there as a representation over the thoughts in Keith's mind, not actually written on the wall. :P
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Hyehhehe. good comic tom!

although, it's kinda hysterical how her "ahem" more feminine upper body features are overflowing her arms in one part.
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Keldoth Wolfram Dekel
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Can you say "nipple slip"? XP
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A.J./Kho
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Yes, can you say the Double CA is actually "Double Crosser"?
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Well Keith certainty has a lot on his mind.
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I like how I stayed up 'till three to be the first one to post, and it is updated AFTER I wake up... XD

The writing on the wall is a great effect. Poor little ol' Keith...
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Keldoth Wolfram Dekel wrote:
Can you say "nipple slip"? XP


You'll notice that her arms and hands change position from panel to panel. I think Natani is, subconsciously, doing that to bring attatention to her feminine parts to hopefully get Keith to notice her. Keith has his back facing her the whole time while she's confiding in him and revealing something very personal for her.

Keith you nincompoop, turn around!
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I like the writing on the wall, it's a nice effect. Normally I wouldn't notice something like that until the forum pointed it out to me. :P

I feel bad for Keith.
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Alright, site's all fixed! Very nice comic.
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What's this? An update, and with dimension? IT BURNS!!
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The light in the last frame looks weird. Why do only parts of his ears throw shadows?
Other than that, I can't spot any mistakes. I also like the mood you created in the comic and am happy that it finally goes on.
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Aw man, her arm just had to be crossed? Oh well, I guess she has some dignity.
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you and me both, Ford.

I think, and this is just a prediction-- that Natani will snap. Either becoming fully male-in-mind, or female-in-mind. Either that, or moodswings between the two. but meh, i'm a guesser.
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