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In the ranting board i had a poll asking about how likely you would read my comic, but i never gave you a story or art, so right now im giving you the first glimpse of our new comic! from left to right Tenko, Blane, Hazuki.

http://busoni.deviantart.com/art/Webmanga-Test-Image-91418731

Now we are currently editing Tenko at the moment, she will prob. no longer have the braid and her hair will be much longer.

Blane (he's the one in the middle, right?) reminds me of Eric Foreman. You've seen That 70's Show, no doubt?
EDIT: That 70's Manga. [Censored] yes.
I like it, but the girl on the left's neck seems extremely long.

yea, thats another thing were talking about.....
keep the comments coming! i need to know what yall think!

*cringe* Their eyes are so... HUGE.

And I can't help but notice he/she's been dabbling in My Little Ponies... :shock:

Ha. I was wondering how I got on your deviantart page. Sometimes tabs are bad for me. I open a million of them, and when I start going through them, I forget why I opened them. :P

Aside from them not being furries(kidding :P), I like it! I really like the shading on their skin, the dark hues you used, and their clothing looks nice. I think the two characters on the right came out really well, too. Although the girl to the far right seems a tad too skinny, unless you meant that.

Keep it up, though! Anime is not really my thing, but hey. It looks good anyway.

Were making some adjustments to her as we speak so no worries!

Ditto on PK about the anime. I've never been much a fan of the stuff, just because it seems to always look the same. Japanese fanboy/girl culture just rubs me the wrong way, and for some reason anime men/women either look Age 15, 40, or 80.

well in this manga, all the characters are 15 and 16 so that works out ok!
just promise youll give it a try, Please?

That is so true!! You forgot 6, though. 6, 15, 40 or 80. :P

:P I'll give it a whirl, but no guarantees I'll stick around for it. I've never liked anime, and TwoKinds is pushing it as it is. Main reason is that the characters are so young, which makes any sexual themes that play out incredibly uncomfortable.

Not horrible. I've seen some bad art for this kind of thing.
Just capture me with the story.

I don't know why, but the girl with the blond hair is cool, but where her hair is red, I just don't feel it... Maybe because the lineart disappear there and nowhere else... I dunno... need, sugar :shock:

well actually, there's one more age, 120.