TheSpiffman wrote:
The Warhammer picture is very nice, and I'm not just saying that because I like space marines (Seriously, I don't even play the game) Though the mech seems a little too artificial.
And the comic referenced the Divine comedy heavily, so that scores points in my book. The writing could be a little tighter though, and you need to work on perspective.
But hey, you had a literary reference, It's all good
Huh, most people say that said the Dreadnaught (the mech) looks better than the space marines. I understand what you mean though.
Dante's, The Inferno, is one of my favorite classic pieces of literature :D . You are not the only person to have said I writing needs to be tighter. Whenever I have a paper checked, the checker says my writing is a tad to "fluffy." One person saed that my writing is similar to 18th-19th century writing style. I still do not know what she meant by that :? .
Thanks for your help!
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