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Im starting a basic RP of hell rising. I admit I screwed my first one up that was my bad and im trying to start a new one.

Rules are as follows
You cannot KILL or majorly harm another character.
Players may enter at any time.
Average restrants on character power.
you may kill animals that run around.
Summons aloud.
Only one class per person.
NO major things like world destruction.
No futureistic stuff
Basic gunpowder allowed no new things

Character Sheet

Name:
Age:
Race: Keidren (either Hells minion Or Heavens Messenger(good guy) Human
Class:
Description:
Weapons:
Personality:
Summon:
Magic(only if you are a magic user)

We clear on this guys
Only 10 people can join otherwise its just to hard for me to keep up.
There are also going to be a few classes

Magic:Healer-What type of healing (mass or single)
Magic:Nuker-What mastered Element
Warrior- 2 weapons allowed

There is also 2 mods Myself and Optix
we decide whos in and whos out
People So Far: 4/10
Optix *(Mod)
Myself(MOD)
Auronblades Mod when im not on)
Choaseye

Name: Drake
Age: 16 Human Years
Race: Demon Keidran/Hells Minion
Description: Claws, Cute faced, Rabbit like ears, slender, wears tattered clothes.
Class: Magic Nuker
Magic: Master of the abyss
Weapons: Two Swords that double as a Glieve
Personality: Bright But arrigant
Summon: Hellthisa [Pronouced Hell-the-sa](goddess Of the Abyss)
This is just something simple

Your rules are too general and insufficient.

Try looking at the rules of one of the popular RPs to get a better understanding of them.

Yeah, this is better, but as Yash said, you should add some stuff before it can be respectable.

If this is going to be hell rising, you can probably guess there will be killing or mortal wounding, but you should make it so the player controlling the character allows it.

Plus the profile, could use some extra things, such as a bio, unless this is supposedly an RP for new people. It can be slipped by.

Could add no never being hit or always hitting a guy(Partly godmodding)

And you could also say whether the stuff can be above PG-13 or not.

That's about it.

Name: Marduke
Age: 18 human years
Race: Demon Keidran/Hells Minion
Class: Warrior
Description: tall (6' 11.5"), muscular, vampire-ish face, white wispy hair, red eyes, dark red armour with bat emblems, black cape made of living bats
Weapons: A Great Sword (perfect for decapitation) and 2 bladed gauntlets (for when i can't be bothered with using the great sword)
Personality: Highly Intelligent and knows it, courtious, friendly
Summon: The Undead

Thou Is added
*points at optix*
*covers neck*
dont bite me
*runs holding neck*

don't worry, you're safe

i'm in total control of myself and the vampires.........
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.............................at least i'm pretty sure i am :lol:

meep..........................................................
*runs*
youll never tke me alive your bats probely but you will never take me alive
*runs some more*
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is it safe to come out

yeah it's safe
just don't piss me off
*holds out hand to help Dragon out of his corner*

Name: Able Skywing
Age: 23 (human years)
Race: Keidran /Heavens Messenger
Class: Warrior
Description: brown short hair, medium build, white wings, a back less white shirt, with cloth pants, one green eye and one blue eye,
Weapons: large katana down his back between his wings and a bladed wing cover on his right and left wing and he has bad vision.
Personality: lawful good
Summon:Draco of Light

*points at auron*
thou are accepted

a couple of things
A) Wing blade should kinda go
B) kinda change the summon on FF2 i have holy best lvl it changed name to Angel soul which does 10K of damage so it should be something a little more.......................................................................... Different name like mine

*rofl*
wing blade can stay for all i care

*grabs random human and sucks his/her blood*
ahhh..... refreshing :twisted:

there i changed my person but whats wrong with the name able is a good name

Thats better auron but then wings are uneven to you kinda gotta equalize that a bit you wont be able to fly
other wise thou are accepted