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I was just testing my ability to edit and I think it came out pretty good. Maybe a little on dark side.

Great art. I like it but I have two comments to do. First, you should have posted it in the drawing board. Second, the belt's buckle and the sandals probable be less dark. Also, compare hollow Zen and hollow Natani. I think that the fur color of Zen should be more a lighter brown. I hope you find the critics constructive.

Ça reste un beau travail.

S.P.P.

remember i said it came out "a little dark". Plus there might be a gender coloration thing. Male -> Darker, Female -> Lighter. Might mess with story then. Because if they suspect Natani is male. They see that she is actually lighter. DARN >_<

Yay for burnt Zen! :3

If anything, Zen is more tan colored than than Natani is....

Compare Natani's hand/paw (grasping Zen's arm) to Zen's...Natani is darker.

It is also noticeable, despite Zen's transparency, in the latest comic if you compare their tails.

Nice work though.