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kryss
 Post subject: 2fangs: A Zen and Natani Prequel Fanfic
PostPosted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 7:29 pm 
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I just finished part 1 of a 2kinds fanfic I call '2fangs', which is about Zen and Natani joining and training in the Brotherhood of the Fang. I know that it's too early to have it be any sort of accurate, but I had the story in my head, (your fault, avwolf!) so I had to write it!

This is only part 1 of a series of short fanfics. I hope you like it! *^_^*

2fangs Part 01
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Fatalcrash wrote:
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Made a change based on your comment. Thank you! *^_^*
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I found it quite interesting; can't wait to read the next installment.
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Thank you very much! *^_^*
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IT'S A LION!
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Hmm. I thought the Brotherhood didn't take girls. Oh well.

Some adorably cute non-canon background to Natani there. "Kill the runt." :shock: We'll see how that goes. Excellent writing.
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IT'S A LION! wrote:
Hmm. I thought the Brotherhood didn't take girls. Oh well.


That's some people's theory. That's not how I see it - it will become more clear in time, why it is that Natani is dressing up as a guy if the Brotherhood takes girls.

I see it much less as a "to join the brotherhood" problem and much more of an "to be a girl is to be weak" problem.

IT'S A LION! wrote:
Some adorably cute non-canon background to Natani there.


Do you mean the whole story, or her reminiscing on her life before the death of her village? It's sorta intermingled in there, and whatever it is you liked, I'm glad you like it! *^_^*

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"Kill the runt." :shock: We'll see how that goes. Excellent writing.


Thank you! *^_^* I'll try to get the next part out soon, so you can find out what happens!
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Excellent! While I can't say it's the best fanfic I've ever read, it comes darn close! Can't wait for part 2!
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Adjutant Reflex wrote:
Excellent! While I can't say it's the best fanfic I've ever read, it comes darn close! Can't wait for part 2!


Well, thank you! *^_^* I wouldn't expect it to be all /that/ good yet... it's only started!
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...why are you still here?

...Shouldn't you be WRITTING!?
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I left a comment on the DA. Great job!
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Thank you for the response! It's always nice to know what people think about it, rather than just sitting there guessing and wondering. *^_^*
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kryss wrote:
Thank you for the response! It's always nice to know what people think about it, rather than just sitting there guessing and wondering. *^_^*


Your Welcome :) ! Of course guessing and wondering what is going to happen next is only half the fun. I mean, we all do it when ever a new update of twokinds comes up.
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kryss wrote:
Thank you for the response! It's always nice to know what people think about it, rather than just sitting there guessing and wondering. *^_^*


Darn right. :o
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IT'S A LION!
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Yeah, I've known that feeling a time or two. No worries, mate, we comment like there's no tomorrow.
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