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*Walks up to podium. Taps mic.*
"Attention, my minions. Today is a glorious day. Today is the day that I shall repost the story that I recently revised. The story is long and some has been changed. I suggest that you all re-read or skim through it."

Due to how extermly long this revised story is, I'm going to make it easy for you to find certian places in the story. Press crtl+f and search for one of the following:
PKD1 (For the Prom)
PKD2 (For Saturday)
PKD3 (Sunday)
PKD4 (Monday)
PKD5 (Tuesday)
PKD6 (Wendsday)

My name is Seraphim. I’m an average teenage high school student. The only weird things about my life are my long black hair and my girlfriend.
One day, I was walking around after school. There was almost no one in the school. It was quiet. Just the way I like it. I turned a corner, and heard a girl sobbing in the distance. Ahead of me about 30 yards, was a red head crouching on the floor crying. A football player walked past me. I heard him mutter, “Man, that girl is a freak…â€

dang. story was too long for the post. okay. here's the part that got cut off.

I hugged her again and she giggled at my joke. I could hear Al making a gagging sound behind me. He didn’t like the whole dating and romance thing. Corona, on the other hand, was more or less tolerant of it. As for Marik…well, he had that thing with Rachael, so he knew about it in his own way.
The rest of our lunch period was spent talking about games. Kitsune had a wide variety of games and talked about a good deal of them. It was odd though that she had no signs of video gaming supplies in her room. I asked her about that.
“Oh,â€

wow... nice work! deffinatly one of my favorite storys around here ;)

Okay, here's the next little bit. And right now, I'm wondering if I waited too long to repost this. I've never had this many fans at one time.... Anyways, the next part:

“So,â€

:O :O :O :O :O :O :O :O

SO MUCH WORK!!! SO MUCH COOLNESS!!! I love this story.

Hehe. Cute. Its a fun story, but there's a few problems.

The beginning of the story was of a lower quality than where it is right now. I suggest you go back and revise it. Secondly, the transformation gun seems to be VERY similar to the one in EGS.

Keep writing, dude. I want to know what happens next. :3

ooo nice :D

I'll give you the benifit of the doubt. I mentioned in my other thread that I had this in, entitled My Story, that the story was inspired by EGS, hence the transformation gun. I try not to use the jokes from it, but I do add them in at times. Those who read the comic should notice a few jokes that have been altered slightly.

Anyways, the next part is coming. I just haven't had time to work on it due to school.

I like what I've read so far. It's taking me forever to get through it though. I'm only half way. :roll: I'll read the rest another day, too many stories to comment on. :)

NECROPOST!!!! actually, i jsut wanted more ppl to read the story. It's really good. :3nod:

I'm glad you did bring this story back up. This is an incredible story that I had so much fun reading. Oh, and Seraph, might I hask you something? I was wondering if I could add this story to my website with your full credidation. This is a wonderful story that I'd like all my friends to read. So what say you? >^.^<

Back again after a long waiting period. Okay, I'm not sure about posting up more....school has kicked in and I'm really struggling to balance out my social life and school work.

And Moddex, if you want, I guess you could. It's technically not done yet....but I guess you could.

Hey man, this is an awesome story so far. Can't wait to read more, but don't rush yourself. Get your social life/school life balanced out first, then give us more! MORE I SAY! *fistshakes*

I'll drink to that! Very nice story my friend.
Thouroughly enjoyed it. :)

pretty funny, iil say that. keep up the good work! :)