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 Post subject: The Prophesy of a God; Updated Oct. 15
PostPosted: Sun Oct 05, 2008 10:39 am 
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(I'm doing this on another forum but there aren't as many people so I don't realy get too much feedback so I'll post it here too. Also because there are alot of typos on the other one that I made. But anyway, here is the intro to the story.)


So this is how it ends hugh. Soaking in a pool of my own blood surrounded by every god and demon that wanted me dead..... Damn. I die with so many regrets, so little goodbies, *hack* not even getting to say sorry to so many people that I treated horribly. Where did it all begin?
(Start last flashback.)


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PART 1

LC: I don't care! *slam* (Chineraloph slams his fists into the table.) Innocent people are dying in this war!!!
Lord Zene: Lord Chimera, please. You are now an Omega, one of the five leaders of Heaven, Hell, and the Underworld. Now start acting like it!
LC: Silence old man, I don't need to take orders from you while innocents are dying!
Lord Zene: Why I've never! (Zene thrusts out his hand and LC is lifted into the air by his neck and thrown over the table into the wall.) *SLAM*(Blood begins to pour from Chimeraloph's unconscious skull.)
Merana: No!
Zene: Be seated now Merana. Your husband was ill mannered and needed to be dealt with!
Merana: Yes, I see.

(Hours later at the Omega Mannar.)
LC: Ugn. Merana! What happened?
Merana: Zene went overboard after your outboast.
LC: Yeah, but after that. Something about real matters at hand hun.
Merana: Oh yeah, uh. We were talking about me and you.
LC: What?!
Merana: Yeah. Since were both very important people and since I'm the Omega Demon and your one of the two Omega Gods of Hell,... Well, our relationship might get in the way of us doing our jobs. Not to mention that your a god and I'm a demon.
LC: But that's the beauty of it. never before have a god and demon fallen in love and the public found out about it.

(Begin flashback to when Chimerahloph first met Merana.)
Lord Zene: Good evening Mr. Chimeraloph. I am Zene, one of the two Omega Gods of Heaven.
LC: It's very nice to meet you but could you fully inform me as to what this is all about.
Lord Zene: Well, since one of the Omegas of Hell passed on, we managed to find out that he was tutoring you.
LC: Yeah. Ludiver.... He was like my second father. We were always close.
Lord Zene: Since you were taught many techniques by him, the other three omegas and myself thought it wise to have you take his place.
LC: Wow. So...
Lord Zene: Oh, of course. There are two Omega Gods rulling over heaven and two more over hell but only one Omega Demon is ruling over the underworld.
LC: Oh. So what's he like. Some 500,000 year old decrepit old bat.
Lord Zene: Actually, SHE is about your age.
LC: Wait she....
(Merana walks toward Lord Chimeraloph and Zene.)
Merana: Hi. You must be Lord Chimera. The fresh fish.
LC: Well actually I'm a 200 foot tall lion, snake, eagle, dog, dragon monstrosity. I just take this form so I wouldn't be too big. The form of a fish... I mean kyote. But you can just call me LC.
Merana: Hmhmhm. Your cute.
LC: Th... th... thanks....
(Merana leaves after Lord Zene gives her a cold stare.)
Lord Zene: Don't even think about it boy. She'll be the death of you, besides she's a demon and your a god. Anyways, to continue...
(Zene opens a very large set of doors that leads into the dining hall with the most beautiful tapestry of the original Omega.)
Lord Zene: This is where we shall eat every morning and night. During the day, we will meet in there to discuss matters about the realms.
(He pointed across the giant dining hall to the opposite side where lay another set of large doors.)
LC: Why exactly is everything in this place much larger than anywhere else.
Lord Zene: Well this is the Manner of the Omegas. *KREEEK*
(The large set of doors leading to the meeting room opened and two elderly gods stepped out, one wearing the most extravagant white cape Lord Chimera had ever seen and the other wearing a very dark and mysterious robe. They made their way toward Chimeraloph and Zene.)
Lord Phoenix: Allow us to introduce ourselves, I am Lord Phoenix.
Lord Griffin: And I am Lord Griffin.
Lord Phoenix: It is truly an honor to meet the new Omega God of Hell.
Lord Griffin: As you know, I am the other Omega God of Hell.
LC: Of course I know you. You fought alongside my father in the war.
Lord Griffin: And a fine young man your father was, until....

(End of flashback.)
Merana: Yeah, but...
(The door opens and Zene walks in.)
Lord Zene: Good, your awake Chimeraloph. I just wanted to apologize for what I had done to you earlier. It was barbaric and criminalistic of me.
LC: No, It's all right. I should have never yelled at you and insulted you in such a way. I'm terribly sorry. I will go and prepare for dinner.
(Lord Chimeraloph leaves the room.)
Lord Zene: So, does he suspect anything.
Merana: Of course not. He's a foolish puppet that I control with the mear pull of a string.


-End of part one


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PART 2

Lord Phoenix: So, what do you propose we do.
Lord Griffin: Well, the rebels aren't helping at all.
LC: I know.
Merana: They've almost penetrated the walls of Hell and they now refuse to listen to me. Said I've gotten weak since I've fallen for one.
Lord Griffin: I don't like it but if more of your troops keep attacking the walls around my castle, I'll be forced to have mine fight back full force after killing off the last of the rebels.
LC: I don't want to see that happen.
Lord Zene: Neither do we but something has to be done. The High Court of Heaven has done a fine job to keep Heaven out of this new tide in the war.
LC: My head hurts.
Lord Phoenix: If the rebel gods in Hell dislike their traditions, why don't they go join the demons.
LC: Because the demons made it clear yesterday that they didn't want and help from the gods when they killed twelve of them after leaving the walls of Griffins Castle. You were busy yesterday during a meeting so we didn't want to bother you.
Lord Zene: I wonder why they aren't really attacking you Lord Chimera.
LC: Well, only a few are but most wont because they now I'm with Merana. Many gods and demons only know what is going on with their leader but when I married Merana, I basically became partial leader of the Underworld and leader of Hell.
Lord Griffin: Yes, but that doesn't mean that they'll listen to you.
LC: It might.

(Later that night.)
Lord Zene: You should leave tonight.
Merana: I was planning on going in the morning so he wouldn't be suspicious.
Lord Zene: So tell him that you have a family affair.
Merana: He'd follow me and do anything to help even if I did.
Lord Zene: Fine, but do you think you can leave without him noticing before mid-day.
Merana: I'm sure.
Lord Zene: Alright.

(Early the next morning in bed while Chimeraloph is still asleep.)
Merana: (Good, he's still out. We need to do our best in order to prevent him from halting this war. It's the only thing bringing us real profit and besides, I don't want to die!)
LC: Hey baby, what are you doing.
Merana: (Damn!) Hey, I was just getting up to cook us some breakfast.
LC: Nonsense, I can do it. Just go back to sleep and I'll wake you when it's ready.
Merana: (Shut the hell up!) No! I insist on making us our breakfast so get some shod eye!
LC: (Whoa.) Alright.
(Chimeraloph falls back into bead and Merana leaves the room.)
LC: I wonder what she's so upset about. Was it something I've done. Hope not.
(Lord Chimera gets out of bed a few hours later to find Merana nowhere in sight. He sees Lord Zene walk by.)
LC: Hey! Lord Zene. Have you seen Merana around?
Lord Zene: (So she was able to leave but she was noticed.) Yes I have, someone showed up here earlier to take her away while she was in the kitchen. Something about a problem in the family. She told me to tell you but I forgot. Sorry.
LC: Oh, well that's alright. I'll go back to my room and medetate on what to talk about in the conference room.
Lord Zene: Good idea.
(Chimeraloph wanders slowly back to his and Merana's room thinking.)
LC: (Hm, why wouldn't she tell me that she was going to leave. Certainly she would have time to come to talk to me and tell me herself. Besides, I didn't even smell anything from the kitchen. Hm.)
(Lord Chimera walks into the room to only feel something amiss.)
LC: Wait! All of her stuff, i, it, it's gone!
(Lord Chimera runs down the spiral staircase into the briefing room to see Lord Zene and Lord Phoenix speaking.)
LC: Where is Merana really! All of her stuff is gone and there is no way she came back in after she left to cook breakfast. Her scent is old.
Zene: Would you really like to know boy. Ha, ha, ha.
(Lord Zene and Phoenix unchief their swords and point them towards Lord Chimera.)
LC: What is this?!
(Lord Griffin walks in behind Chimeraloph and closes the doors.)
Lord Griffin: A surprise.


-End of part two


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PART 3

(Merana in front of a crowd of demons.)
Merana: He has betrayed the most important of all laws and shall be dealt with.
(down in the crowd)
Trevor: (Wow, I'm impressed that so many believe her. Obviously it's a load of bollocks. LC is too kind of a person to ever do that. Betrayin every god and demon alive.) *chuckle* (You can't fool me.)
(Trevor leaves the crowd but is followed by someone. He turns into a bar to sit down and hears Merana on the radio.)
Merana: This nonsensical hazard has been lying straight to our faces and *fuzz* *fuzz*
Bartender: Damn radio. Doesn't get very good reception in this blasted bar. *click*
(The man that followed Trevor walked into the bar and sits down at the table behind him)
Bartender: Well, I hate to do it but I guess there's a new bounty.
(the bartender places a piece of paper on the board behind the bar with the number 500,000,000 in bold and Chimeralophs face below it.)
Bartender: Just sent in about a half an hour ago.
Trevor: Your kidding me. Their actually putting a bounty on someone like him!
(The man behind Trevor stepped up next to him)
Valk: I like it.

(Elsewhere in Omega Manor. Lord Griffin pulls out two knives and stabs Chimeraloph in the back with one.)
LC: Damn!
Lord Griffin: Just accept it. Your going to die today.
(Lord Chimera jumps into a corner of the room and falls to the floor)
LC: So, what was your plan and how long have you been planing.
Lord Zene: Before you even became and Omega and to kill you after we killed Master Ludiver.
LC: What?! You killed him!
Lord Zene: Yes. He knew that he couldn't kill all four of us so he just accepted it.
LC: Liar!
(Chimeraloph jumps to his feet and pulls the dagger from his back and leaped forward. Lord Phoenix swings his sword and strikes Chimeraloph back down to the floor)
Lord Phenix: How do you like it. It's a new weapon. A sword made of pure holy material. Any demon or god of hell struck with it is sure to start losing strength immediately.
(Lord Chimera coughs and blood starts pouring from his throat, chest, and back onto the floor around him.)
Lord Zene: You see boy, you nor that pathetic excuse Ludiver could be strong enough to take action in a fight, just like your father and mother.
LC: TAKE THAT BACK!

(Flashback to Chimeraloph's last memory of his father and mother.)
Daru: I'm proud that you haven't let your younger brother taking our attention away from you affect how you feel.
LC: It's alright dad. I understand that he is just a baby.
Daru: Good boy.
Alexandria: Shh. He's sleeping.
Daru: Good, he has been crying ever since we brought him home from the hospital- *boom*
(The front door is blown in by a blast of fire and a large dragon with a scar over his right eye walks through the doorway.)
Mysterious Demon: Remember me Daru?
Daru: Valk! You should be dead!
Valk: Ha! Hopefully you didn't think I'd be that weak. Your pathetic little sword couldn't do anything. Aaaahhhhhh!
(Valk inflames the room with an enormous fireball knocking Chimeraloph into the wall and paralyzed. Valk walks over to Daru and picks up his limp body by the arm.)
Valk: I'll make you suffer and then I'll make your family suffer.
(He rips off one of Daru's arms and tosses it to the floor.)
Daru: AAAAHHHHHHH!
Valk: You were successful in killing everyone else though. While I was on the ground I could hear their screaming and crying while being ripped to shreds by you and your men. When I was able to regain my stature, I could see the damage done with my remaining eye.
(Valk rips off one of Daru's legs forcing him unconscious from the pain. He throws Daru on Chimeraloph and moves toward Alexandria who has landed on the table in the kitchen breaking her back. Chimeraloph could only hear the moaning then screaming of his mother until he saw the large dragon drop her in front of him and head for the room with his baby brother in it.)
LC: (Oh my goodness.)
(Chimeraloph's mother lie there headless on the floor in front of him with tears in her clothing. The baby in the room started crying again and Chimeraloph instantly rose from the ground without control and ran into the room stumbling.)
LC: Don't move!
(He could see the dragon standing over his crying brother's crib.)
Valk: I'm impressed kid, you have great power and bravery. You would have made quite a man in the future if only you had remained on the floor.

(End of flashback.)
(Chimeraloph gets up again and jumps toward Zene but disappears midway)
Lord Zene: What in the name of...
(The blade slices through Zene's neck like butter and his limp body falls to the floor.)
Lord Phoenix: Dear god! You'll pay for that!

(Back at the bar.)
Trevor: Who exactly are you?
Valk: Valk, the gre-
Trevor: Oh yeah. Your the guy who used to be one of the greatest commanders of the demon army. Today your just a washed up bounty hunter huh.
Valk: I'm not washed up, hound!
Trevor: Oh yeah. Then how'd you get that scar over your eye.


-End of part three


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PART 4

Gale: And your sure he won't die.
Merana: Positive.
Gale: Why?
Merana: The Prophecy.

(Back at Omega Manor.)
LC: Damn!
Lord Griffin: Your going to die today.
LC: No, You'll pay for what you did. What you all have been doing.
Lord Phoenix: How long have you known exactly.
LC: I didn't, I took a wild guess.
Lord Phoenix: Oh well, you reacted a bit too late!
(Lord Phoenix forces his sword down hard upon Chimeraloph's back cracking his spine and ribs.)
LC: AAAAAAHHHHHHH! You [censored]!
(Lord Phoenix thrusts his sword toward Chimeraloph and Lord Chimera grabs the end of the blade.)
Lord Griffin: What in the name of...
(Lord Chimeraloph grips the blade harder with blood gushing from his palm and pulls the sword from Lord Griffins hands.)
LC: Take this.
(Chimeraloph slashes off Lord Griffins right arm and stabs him in the chest while falling to the floor.)
LC: *Pant* *Pant* Now it's your turn.
Lord Phoenix: I'd like to see you kill me in the condition your in.
LC: OK.
(Lord Chimeraloph stumbles to his feet and pulled the sword from Lord Griffin's carcase.)
LC: Ha, ha, ha.
Lord Phoenix: You're delusional from the blood loss. An easy kill.
LC: Maybe so, but I can still kick you [censored].
(Lord Phoenix and Chimeraloph's swords clash and both break in the air)
Lord Phoenix: What just happened?
LC: What I wanted to happen.
(Lord Chimeraloph thrusts the shared spattered broken end of the sword into Lord Phoenix.)
Lord Phoenix: Little [censored].
(Lord Phoenix sticks his sword into Chimeraloph's hip. Lord Chimera looks at Lord Phoenix dizzily.)
LC: I can't even feel the pain any more. Funny huh.
(He pulls his sword from Lord Phoenix and sticks into in him again.)
Lord Phoenix: *hack* No!
(Lord Phoenix falls to the floor with blood spurting from his mouth.)
LC: Now your gana... gana get it.
Lord Phoenix: Wait! Do you even want to know the truth.
LC: Why should I care. I just want to avenge Ludiver.
Lord Phoenix: But don't you see. He wanted to die.
LC: Hold your tongue.
Lord Phoenix: No. I will speak. He knew of what would happen as did we. Before you kill me, go into the dining room and rip the tapestry from the wall.
(Lord Chimera limps out the door into the massive dining hall. He takes what is left of his sword and slices down the work of art to see something written on it's back.)
Lord Chimera: The the greatest and last of the lords, let there be great power and fame. For soon after their leadership prevails, their soul will me maned. They must kill the last of their allies, betray their family and and kin, and defy every law within. For only then can they and the war be brought to an end... What does it mean?
(Chimeraloph stumbles back into the room where he left Lord Phoenix laying on the ground.)
LC: What does it mean?!
(Lord Phoenix just lays on the ground motionless staring at Lord Chimeraloph.)
LC: Don't make me ask you again. WHAT *pant* DOES *pant* IT....
(Lord Chimerah then sees a pool of blood begin to form around Lord Phoenix's head. He had taken a shard of the broken sword and stabbed himself.)
LC: Damn. I wanted to do that.
(Chimeraloph falls to the ground passed out from blood loss.)

(Elsewhere at the bar.)
Bartender: Hey! Get out of the bar if your going to do that! *SLAM* *CRASH*
(Valk throws a table at Trevor and he jumps out of the way to trow a bottle of wine.)
Bartender: Damn it! Security!
(Two built demons come from the back room.)
Valk: Great now there's more!
Trevor: What did you expect for when he called security dumb [censored]!
Guard 1: Leave this bar now or suffer the consequences.
Trevor: That's my que.
(Trevor runs out the tavern doors into the street.)
Valk: Coward! I could take you both on.
(Soon afterward Valk is thrown from the bar into the street.)
Trevor: Ha, ha, ha, ha! You sure got them didn't you.
Valk: Your lucky I'm too tired to kill you.
Trevor: Whatever.
(Trevor helps Valk up from the ground.)
Trevor: So, how do you know him?
Valk: Know who?
Trevor: LC.
Valk: Who?
Trevor: obviously your no friend of his. Chimeraloph.
Valk: Ah. (Better not give him too much details.) I owe him something.
Trevor: Oh.

-End of part four


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Read first two chapters, but my eyes hurt so I'll continue tomorrow. Interesting so far - might even like it :)

You have a lot of talk, but little description or detail. Reminds me of how plays are usually written.


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Reminds me of how plays are usually written.


Yeah, that is what I was gunning for.


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PART 5

(Back at the manor several hours later.)
LC: Hmm. Whoa. D-d-d-d. Did... I... Do... This...? There... All... Dead. How could I have...?
(Chimeraloph staggers to his feet.)
LC: Does this mean I'll be on the run for the rest of my life? A convict overwhelmed by fear? No. I... I need friends.
(Chimeraloph runs for the doors.)

(In the Underworld at the Demon Castle.)
Merana: *Yawn* It has been years since I've slept in this bed. I forgot how good it feels with so much space.
(Gale, her personal bodyguard, enters the room.)
Gale: My lady. Our troops have reached the gates of the Omega Manor.
Merana: Good. I want him dead before he gets the chance to breath fresh air. Have there been any dispute between the gods and demons recently?
Gale: No my lady. Everyone has gathered together, despite differences, to stop him.
Merana: Good. Then it's all according to my plans.

(Back at the manor.)
*KREEEK* (The doors open to reveal an enormous army of all kinds trying to break through the gates.)
LC: What is going on? How did they find out?... Merana! Damn her! *Crash*
(The gates break down and Chimeraloph runs back inside dashing for another way out.)
LC: There should be a scouting point on the roof that should still have the old wire holding it up.
(As Lord Chimera hurries up the stairs as fast as he can, he hears other closing in on him.)
LC: Cursed wounds!
(Moments later he reaches a door and he thrusts it open and slams it shut behind him. He bolts the door and runs across the tower.)
Military Men: *Boom* *Boom* *Boom* We know your out there. Open the door and come in peace or else.
LC: Too late.
(Chimeraloph rips off what is left of his shorts and glides down the wire, but it is too weak and old to withhold his weight and the pressure. The wire snaps and Lord Chimera falls through the roof of a house outside the fences.)
LC: *Crash* Ugn.
Woman: Ahhh! What the hell!?
LC: Sorry but you wouldn't happen to...
(Chimeraloph stand naked in front of the woman.)
Woman: *blush* Um, yes. Here are some of my husbands clothes.
LC: Thank you and thank your husband for-
Woman: Wait! I know you! Help! Someone!
(The woman runs through the house and out the door. Chimeraloph jumps out the window in the bedroom and runs for an alleyway.)
LC: *Pant* *Pant* I'll. *Pant* Have to. *Pant* Sit here for a while. *Pant*
(He falls over, passed out on the ground.)

(Off in the distance)
Trevor: And that's how I met LC. Saved my life and my family. How about you.
Valk: Humph. I'm the exact opposite. We started on the wrong foot. If you would call it that.

(Flashback to when Chimeraloph last saw Valk.)
Valk: I'm impressed kid, you have great power and bravery. You would have mad quite a man in the future if only you had remained on the floor. AAAAHHHHH!
(Valk lunges towards Chimeraloph and he jumps out of the way. He pulls his fathers sword from his jacket that he had hidden before entering the room.)
Valk: Ha! Be careful with that boy. You may poke your eye out.
LC: You have no right to talk to me monster.
(Chimeraloph jumps toward Valk like lightning and gashes through one of Valk's wings.)
Valk: DAAAAAMN! You little [censored]!
(He turns but Chimeraloph was already in mid-air moving toward him. Chimeraloph cuts off the other wing and trips to the ground.)
Valk: Damn you pestilence. *Pant* I'll get you back for this. *Pant*
(Valk runs from the room and trips down the stairs on his way out. Chimeraloph lays on the floor.)
LC: And stay out!

(End of flashback.)
Valk: But I'd rather not talk about it. That's behind me.
Trevor: Good, and were almost ther- Whoa!
(The militaries of Heaven, Hell, and the Underworld stand at the gates of the manor along with a large crowd. They see the other omegas pulled from the manor in body bags and on stretchers.)
Trevor: No. It can't be true. He would have never done such a thing. I'm sure of it.
Valk: Tisk, tisk. He's really going to get it now.
Trevor: Shut the hell up! I knew him. He wouldn't do anything to hurt anyone. Chimeraloph only wanted to help people!
(Others in the crowd turn in the direction of the two after hearing the name.)
Valk: I guess that's our que to get the-
Guard: Hey, you two.
Trevor: Time to run.
(Trevor and Valk run down the streets and turn into an alleyway. They see someone lying on the ground and ignore them.)
Valk: Humph. He needs to get off his [censored] and get a job.
Trever: I think we lost them. We should still....
Valk: What is it.
Trevor: I thought I knew that person but I guess not. Now, come on before we get caught.

-End of part five


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wow..... i never knew the story would be this good. great job BB! 8)


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PART 6

(Back in the alley.)
LC: Hugh. Was that Trev, and who was that with him? Looked kinda familiar.
Guard: Hey. Who are... It's Chimeraloph! I found Him!
LC: Damn!
(Lord Chimera crawls to his feet and runs to the opening on the other side of the alleyway.)
LC: Which way did they go? Which way did they go?
(Chimeraloph puts his hood up on the jacket the woman have him and turns left begging to run for his life.)

(Sprinting in the opposite direction.)
Trevor: Did you hear that? Hey! You'd better move faster in order to catch up with me.
Valk: *Pant* Damned dog. *Pant* Come on, slow down.
(Trevor was already too far ahead of him to hear.)
Valk: Better stop. *Pant* Here.
(Valk turns into a bar and to take a break.)
Bartender: You again?! Hey!
Valk: No! No! Wait! I won't do anything. *Pant* I promise. I'm just tired.
Bartender: All right, but I'm keeping an eye on you.
(Valk takes a seat at a table.)

(Across town.)
LC: Whew. I think I lost them. But I also lost Trev. Better go back.
(Pushing through town, Chimeraloph begins to get a little paranoid. He decides to stop at an empty bar. Almost empty.)
LC: Don't mind if I have a drink, do you?
Bartender: Not at all.
(Chimeraloph looks back and sees the guy Trevor was running with. He turns to the bartender to see his face on the bounty board.)
LC: (A bounty?! On my head?!) Do you know who that guy is?
Bartender: No, but he started trouble in here earlier today with someone. He said he was some kind of bounty hunter. Volt, I think it was.
Valk: Hugh. Did you say something?
Bartender: It's Volt, right?
Valk: No, Valk.
LC: (That name. It seems so familiar. Where have I heard it before?) Hi. Name's LC.
Valk: (That name. It seems so familiar.) Valk. Nice to meet you.
(Trevor barges into the bar.)
Trevor: Hey, barkeep. Need the strongest drink ya got. Valk! Thought I lost you.
LC: *gasp* (Trevor!)
Valk: [censored]! You run too fast for others to keep up.
Trevor: Lose some weight then.
Valk: You need your [censored] kicked.
Trevor: So, who is this?
Valk: LC.
LC: (Damn!)
Trevor: Holy [censored]! It's him. Better not let on. Valk has done pretty well to hide the secret.) Hi. I'm Trevor.
(Trevor winks to LC.)
LC: (He must know about the bounty.) Hey.
Valk: Wait... L... C... YOUR-
(The doors open and a delivery boy walks in.)
Bartender: Hey. What's new?
Delivery Boy: Two new bounties! They say that these guys know the location of Lord Chimera. Only 500 though.
(The Bartender unravels the posters and looks up at the three men.)
Bartender: You!
(Valk unhoods LC.)
Valk: I was right! You are Chimeraloph!
Bartender: Die! The lot of ya!
(The bartender reaches behid the bar and pulls out a shotgun laced with gold. The delivery boy and the others stamped out of the bar. The three run side by side with each other. Valk running faster than normal.)
Valk: I should have known!
LC: Wait! I remember you!
Trevor: Now is not the time for a reunion people!
(The three run through the streets, knocking over anyone in the way.)

-End of part six


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PART 7

(Flashback to Trevor’s story of LC.)
Trevor: It all started when LC helped me get a forbidden medicine for my mom and younger sister. I was too young to buy anything at the black market but he wasn’t. I kept asking people to help me but they either refused or threatened to kill me if I didn’t leave them alone. He walked up to me after I stared crying and asked what I needed. I told him about the medicine and he pulled it out of his pocket. ‘How did you get that?’ I asked him. He told me he overheard me and the other people I had asked. He walked me home and we introduced ourselves to each other….

LC: Oh yeah, I’m LC. What’s your name?
Trevor: Hugh, oh. I’m Trevor.
LC: Nice to meet you. I hope your mother and-
Trevor: AAHHHHH!
(LC looks up to see a house engulfed in flames.)
LC: Stay here!
(He takes off for the entrance of the house and kicks in the door. Running through the flames, he can hear the screams of a little girl and an older woman.)
Woman: Help! Someone please!
(The doorway had collapsed and it was impossible to get in. It didn’t matter to him though. LC punches through the wall and pulls it down….)

Trevor: He saved both their lives, but my father had already died.
Valk: Doesn’t sound like the one I know.
Trevor: The only thing is that my mother and sister died soon afterward. And that's how I met LC. Saved my life and my family. How about you?

(End flashback. The three are hiding in a cave in the outskirts of hell.)
Trevor: They killed Ludiver! What? Then they were going to kill you!
LC: They were afraid because they knew the prophecy.
(Valk looks up from the corner he is sitting in.)
Valk: (I could kill him right now. I could get my revenge and the money Merana promised me.)
Trevor: So. What is this great prophesy?
LC: … I’d rather not tell you.
(Valk stands to his feet and reveals his sword.)
Trevor: Look out!
(Valk thrusts his sword through LC’s back and chest. LC looks down to see the sword sticking out of his chest. He then grips the end of the blade and pulls the sword, handle and all, through is chest.)
Valk: The hell?
(LC turns to Valk who falls backwards to the ground and starts crawling away to the opposite side of the cave.)
LC: You have been enough of an annoyance in my life. I will kill you if you ever irritate me again! Understood!
Valk: Y-y-yes. (Damn! Maybe some other time.)
(LC sticks the sword into the ground and walks back to Trevor as if nothing has happened.)

(In the Underworld at the Demon Castle.)
Merana: You what?! You got how close to them and let them get away?! Damn!
Gale: My lady, I am sorry.
Merana: Sorry! Sorry isn’t good enough! And why is Valk helping him? Is there a conspiracy against me or something?
Gale: No my lady.
Merana: Then fix this! That is two strikes against you now redeem yourself Gale!
Gale: Yes my lady.

-End of part six


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