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Earlier this week I let a few folks know that I had an impromptu slashfic in the works, and now that it's at a point where I feel comfortable displaying it, I've loaded it onto my DeviantART account:

http://fastchapter.deviantart.com/art/q ... t-92282026

And in advance, this doesn't pertain to any characters from TwoKinds or Anakuro. I pulled these two canines out from my head and put them together for the story. So if you're looking for Alaric/Keith lovings, sorry, this isn't it.

I have no flipping clue as to how I get the story to appear on the link above. You have to click "Download," to the left, and it'll take you to a bland page with the text on it. I'd rather have it directly on my DA, but I can't figure out how.

If you guys have any clues, shoot me a line. Other than that, feel free to tear it to little bitty ribbons.

"Advanced Critique Encouraged?" *malicious handrubbing*

How much of this is semi-autobiographical, Mr. Coyote? ;)

:3 Who knows?

my eyes...they bleed :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: well written though your very good

You did know this was a male-male furry slashfic before you read it, right? XD

it was good..... no other comments about the content.
I wonder what my GF's doing today, I need to be with a female!!!!!

*bangs head on keyboard*

Like pulling teeth, trying to get some decent feedback from you guys...

to be completely seirous, I have never read a slashfic that well done.
and I was a member of fanfiction.net for...... 3 years. I can honestly say, this one is th best I have read. I cant find anything wrong with it, because im not that good of a writer.

You need to realize that we might not be your best target audience, 'Chap :P

Things happened... fast, but that might be just character quirks. Interesting story none the less.

Writing was good, too - didn't notice any typos and it went pretty much smoothly. I'd try to get more out of it, but english doesn't happen to be my native language.

Overall nice. Perhaps something for a little larger audience next time?

I didn't have a chance to get much further last night, FastChapter, I'm sorry. My friend needed me to do computer work for him, and I'm trying to stay on his good side since he's doing things for me. I've seriously got multiple paragraphs, and I was going to risk doing the feedback thing from work, so I emailed what I had to myself to build on it, and the email server won't give it to me! I can log in to the server and see them right there! I just can't get the email. Don't think you're being ignored, I just need more time!

-- The other problem --
Is that I'm actually really busy at work today... *frown* Stupid work.

:P No worries Av, plenty o' time.

@ Geno: Thanks for the review, and yeah, there's about as many gay/bi men on this forum that I could count them on one hand, but overall I'm not looking for mountains of praise. Just a bit more detail from the folks who have read it, rather than "It was good."

@ Amazing: Thanks as well, though you don't have to be a good writer to find problems. If something happened in the story that just threw you off or didn't sound plausible, you've got plenty of room to let me know. That's kind of what I'm looking for. Less of "this word should have been that word instead," and more "This scene just felt off because ___"

The deed is finally done, FastChapter. I hope the wait was worth it.

Yay!

Edit: I rescind my "Yay!" and replace it with a HOLY [censored]!