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There we have it- Keith who thinks everything all about him only thinking about himself! Even nature hates him. XD

The storm finally hits.

Well at least Keith's situation is simple. Kill Natani as ordered, fight against trace, and live happily ever after with his ex-fiancee (her name escapes me) as the General's official art model!

Or he could take a realistic approach and do none of what ive described, but i didnt have anything solid to contribute to the forum, so this random banter will have to do.

Great work on the comic and the new layout, great to see Eric and Kathrin again. And for the record Keith and Natani are my favorite couple in the story, so dont you dare have him kill her :wink:

when ever a heart breaks the world weeps
:words of wisdom: =3

when the time comes for Keith to choose i bet there will be a Awkward silence before or after.

Ah, the star-crossed lovers...a prime example of how social intolerance, mixed with youthful lapses in judgment, can lead to the shattered dreams of youth and a lifetime of regret...
:(

Panel four had me sniffling - that is a face you never, ever want to see, even less be responsible for causing...
<.<;

Wow...

So does this mean Kryss wins?

Is it just me or does Keith look more... handsome? o-O Something about him is different...

There's a huge column of smoke rising up from behind the hills. Call the fire-brigade!



The angles of his face are sharper than usual.

I really like the lightning in the 7th panel.

And panel #4 looks really beautiful, I love Laura's eyes. She looks really upset. Except... why aren't the tips of her hair grey in that panel? (Is it supposed to be that way on purpose?)

Poor Keith. :P

Tom's always had a problem with continuity.

One thing that I never noticed about many of the other characters, is the Pads on the bottom of their feet. And Laura's is Purple!! That is cool! :P

And his ears almost look longer.. it might be cause they're actually down. Hmn. I like him this way :3
Anyone notice he was about to cry?

Oh and I'd like to say, that I'm glad he lashed out at her. She should feel guilty. Had she just openly told him what was going on, they would've been alright. Either they would've called it off, or gotten married. I think I'd be just as upset too.
Maybe that's why I don't like Laura ._.

I dunno, still don't trust her. I wonder what Natani is feeling about all this..

Aww...Keith shed a tear to. Though, it was only for a moment.

I love the layout of this comic. And the end it great. Not the most original, but it is still fantastic nevertheless.

I think they both need hugs. You know what...I think EVERYONE needs a hug!

(Goes around giving hugs to everyone) :D



I really like that quote :D .

Yes Keith, fell the anger flowing through you.
Keep up the consistant updates Tom, awesome job.

yes. the classic "how could it get any worse" statement.....
....and then it rains. :lol:

laura seems a little insecure. then again, if they had gotten married, their arguments would be pretty short:

Keith: *yells at Laura for doing something he doesn't like*
Laura: "It's my fault" *wimper*
Keith: "...ok..."

Argument Over

x'D Arguements with my boyfriend are that short ._.

Me: *Yells at him for doing something I don't like*
Him: "It's my fault right?"
Me: "Yup."
Him: "Kay."


Then he usually either does it again, or does something else to bug me
xDD