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The end of the comic almost felt inevitable. The paintings were a nice touch, as they really looked like "paintings" instead of drawings.

I agree totally vash. Im happy to see that guy Eric got what he deserved too!...he really deserved that.

I guess he didn't learn the first time. Moron. Dosen't he relize she's with Trace?

Ouch, that really had to hurt... Alot.

To quote a great man- "Loose the zero and get with the hero" Quagmire, Family Guy - Hitting on a woman on a date with another man-- possibly her husband...

And im not so sure it hurt -- we dont even know where he scratched him-- or if it was just his clothes...

He could probably trick them-- have the guards catch Trace by surprise-- with a sword in the heart-- then the Guards could capture Flora and give her to the rich pervert-- Pervert for the win! Comic over! Keith dead! :twisted:

nice well drawn comic ^^, i like the paintings too :)

btw "afterwArds" :p

Good comic, the painting do look like paintings, and we all know eric deserved that.

Woah, Sage! Look who's getting violent all of a sudden :P hypocrite

Hehehehe, looks like he's a trader of art as well as slaves. Still a big pervert (reminds me of the monk on Inuyasha), but maybe, just maybe he'll stop at flirting... and getting slashed... oww. A mixture of Inuyasha and Titanic.

I thinks it's safe to say that this is the least expected scenario...
Well except the last 2 panels, i know i saw that coming :lol:

See my idea is different because it is NOT out of character for people to catch wanted criminals-- it IS out of character for Trace, Flora, and Keith (not Natani i guess) to use violence to solve a problem that in time would prove NOT a solution but a major problem.

The solution of using violence via legal killing (aka Guards) is an acceptable and in the end an actual solution. Big difference between murder and protecting yourself while opening other possibilities.

If you need me to spell it out for you then i will. (of course i wll! i am soooo genrous! :P )

- Trace and Company kills Pervert -- They do not suddenly own his boat - they are already wanted criminals, now they are also wanted for murder - their characters wouldnt do such a thing. Chances are they get caught.

- Trace and Company Threatens pervert-- Pervert agrees to help-- would most likely set up a trap - could get away with it rather easily- they dont know the city, they dont know his every day life and he could be skilled with fighting on his own-- they know nothing about him

- Pervert agrees to help - Lets the guards know about whats going on while he has them hide - he goes off to "get supplies" -- comes back with 20 guards. Pervert legally bags himself 2 new female keidrans - a Bastin - and a dead Trace.

Now for the best solution for Trace and Co. Compromise with the pervert- Have Flora model for him-- no kissing on the lips rule goes into effect (haha lol for those who get it) - they get a boat ride and can trust him more than if they threatened him.

Guess which way is the right way to go and the way Tom will go?
Violence will solve the perverts problem but helping them and they have no violent feelings towards him (cept flora aparently) helps him as well. Since he IS a nice guy this works best for him and best for the group.

All clear?

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I love the look on Eric's face as he pulls the perv routine...

But then again, for all we know, Tom might just have him pull the innocent routine, and come up with some completely innocent meaning for "private entertainment".

Those are really, really nice paintings... Any chance of buying one of those, Tom? XD

That fox is looking quite... foxy. Mreow :3

The last panel was as if Tom was reading my mind.

First, she only hurts him. Then she full on cuts the dude!

Flora-2, Pervert-0.

Flora will move on to the finals.

:roll: Poor pervert
Poor Flora..
Poor everyone!

I also like how the paintings came out. Very good ^__^

One thing I just thought of, if Eric had his "special fun" with all of those keidran afterwards... How many paintings are there is what I'm really wondering.