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You're very late. We were starting to wonder if you were dead, and we'd be forced to harness vile magics and/or twisted science to grant to you a hideous mockery of life in order to get you back here, and we all know how much you hate the undead. :P


You'd think she and Zen would have had to have killed at least one more person after getting themselves nuked by Issac. Maybe they've got a long string of kills behind them, but every single time, circumstances conspired in their favor, and they're assassins more out of dumb luck than anything else.

The only "problem" I've realized with Natani throwing Keith and ending up on top, as I originally predicted, is that it puts Natani in a really awkward looking position. She'd practically end up riding Keith, cowgirl-style. And that might be taking things just a little too far.

Ya...but that would be the perfect time for Flora to walk in wouldn't it?

>.> I choose page 98, what happens now? <.<

Keith has a horrible position though, if he wants to keep his man bits intact, he needs to stop being so high up on her. Space creates opprotunity. He should be almost lying on her really. Silly Keith, when will you ever learn |D

Yes. But I just don't know if Tom wants to go there. I mean, putting Natani in that position would be like feeding a monster. Speaking as a part of that monster, of course. ;) Some of us want that badly enough to draw or write our own renditions of such a scene.


Maybe Keith just trusts Natani to take special care with his manbits. You know, after the last time. :P


This is the last one. Make up your own after this. ;)

Natani grabs Keith's head roughly, and, in one smooth motion, pushes the quivering knifeblade away and pulls Keith's face to hers. She locks fangs with the Basitin and they share a long kiss. When it breaks, Natani looks up into Keith's cloudy eyes, her own eyes shining with tears as well.

"No," she whispers, "That was my fault."

"Natani," Keith whispers back, tears running down his face, "I'm sorry. I'm so sorry." Natani leans up to plant a kiss on Keith's forehead.

"You've got a lot of explaining to do, Keith, but...But I'm going to forgive you. Just this once. And if you ever tell anyone that I kissed you..." Keith laughs through the tears. Just then there's a knock at the door.

"Keith," Flora calls, "I'm really worried about Trace. Could you help me go look for him?" The door knob rattles as Flora opens the door, letting it swing wide and exposing Keith and Natani's naked forms on the floor. Flora's jaw drops wide open, whatever other words she had to say lost. "K-Keith?" Flora asks, dumbstruck.

Turn to page 69

If that's what actually happens next I will laugh all the more so at it.

First off, feed the monster!

Secondly, your really good at the create your own adventure storys. And heeeeeeey! 69 was my page! But maybe Laura should walk in instead?

This is a chapter where theres so many options, that someone is likely to be right, and a lot of people are going to be wrong.

See, when people say that, slashfics get written. It's a scary thing. ;)


Well, that is why I borrowed it. ;) And thanks. :) Reading all those things finally paid off. :P

I rather like to see more story development then monster feeding myself.

x2 Very good and very believable :P

I think the next page probably will show something other than Keith and Natani to leave a cliffhanger but I hope it isn't as that would drive me nuts.

Something else that I thought of is maybe the General of Intelgence is saying it. He has enough spite for Kieth he could be leading into something like,"This is all your fault, if you never came back and accepted your banishment, you would have never been put in this position."

Then again Keith could be saying this to himself too.

Its possible for someone else to be saying this but I'm pretty sure its Keith... for the given situation I think it makes the most sense for him.

Agreed. It just makes the most sence for Keith to be saying it.

I do hope its not a cliffhanger...I mean, everytime you get one, it builds anticipation for the next comic, hoping for it go back to that, but their so annoying..

Theres not much it could go to. Flora is looking for Trace, Trace just got knocked out, Laura is presumably somewhere in the Inn. Unless they want to show something with Mike and Evals, theres not a whole lot that you could do.

Thinking about it, I'd like to see Laura walk in on them, not Flora.

That would be better for the story. I mean, Flora walks in, big whoop. Natani gets stabbed.

Laura walks in, Keith has an attack of conscience, gets off Natani, and has a good cry about his life. (Maybe gets stabbed by Natani somehow.)

But I keep thinking the Dragon is going to be the one to really intervene between them, by making some big ruckus elsewheres that force Keith and Natani to cease and desist.