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 Post subject: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:31 am 
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HES GONNA KILL HIMSELF :shock:



I literaly refreshed the page like 5 seconds after it appeared.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:38 am 
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Don't do it Natani! Let him die!
Oh, the sweetness of victory.

But no, she'll use her magic to save him. Then she'll make Keith her [censored], because we all know that's how things should be.

Also, You can't tell me that Keith is a guy. Not after that second panel.

Furthermore, I think this would have been a great time to give Keith some eye-whites. Didn't we deduce a long time ago that he had them when he was really worked up? I think it would look better with the whites, but that's just me.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:43 am 
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It looks like he's gonna commit heri-kari in the third to last panel.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:45 am 
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OMG! Death to the Keith!
Quick, save him Natani!


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:45 am 
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Kind-of. You need two people for a proper seppuku.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:46 am 
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Not really. To seppuku properly, you only need one person, yourself. The second person is there to remove your head if they decide you need to die mercifully.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:48 am 
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It is still the preferred method to use two people.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:54 am 
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One word:

DRAMA!

Maybe more than that:

!!! PLOT TWIST !!!

A suicide(-attempt?) because of pure love?! Who have seen this coming (except for avwolf...)?!

He self screams "I wont!" and defies all his duty for the generals and his society 'cause of Natani?!

He's a [censored] hero!

Update result:

Terrific work here, Tom!


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:55 am 
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My thought train;

1) Phew he's not gonna kill Natani.
2) Im sure Keiths a girl.
3) OMG! Keith! Don't!
4) Save him Natini !

Or something like that.
In a nut shell im shocked Keith might kill himself.

Hope (S)he survives. :(


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 10:59 am 
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Mysterious Old Guy wrote:
Kind-of. You need two people for a proper seppuku.


Like in Tom Cruise's The Last Samurai.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:02 am 
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Exactly, that was the exact scene I was thinking of. You know, in the woods.


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:03 am 
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Happeh wrote:

2) I'm sure Keith's a girl.

High five!


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:03 am 
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So sad (;_;)


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:05 am 
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If Natani is able to save him (you never really know what will happen) I kinda hope Keith eventually breaks down and starts confessing his feelings for her, because that might just get Natani to break down as well and do the same, allowing some serious emotional development to come into play

That, and you all know you want them to be together :roll:

Either way, Excellent job of pacing the scene Tom, makes the reader want to come back :)


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 Post subject: Re: Comic for 17th october '08
PostPosted: Fri Oct 17, 2008 11:07 am 
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gah! now we have to wait another week to see what happens!!
looks like I was right about Keith not being able to do it.


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